I would like to write about what I did last month. First of all, I went to Vancouver with my best friend. When we arrived there, we visited our friends. Secondly, we spent a good time with them. While we were in Vancouver, we went to Cappilano Bridge. Finally, I decided to going to Victoria, but I had not time. Also, we walked around down town and went to shopping. In short, we had a lot of fun when we were there.
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ReplyDeleteWell written
suggestions - " finally i decided to go to Victoria, but i din't have time."
we went shopping - no to.
Great trip . You had a lot of fun .
ReplyDeleteRegards
Hi Bruce
ReplyDeleteThanks alot for correctto me .
Hi Ibra.
ReplyDeleteIt was nice trip.
Did you visit stanly Park?
Thanks. :)
Hi positive,,,,,,,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your paragraph.
nice trip...